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Writing more concisely

February 19, 2011 Filed under Blog, Featured, Writing 

Why do scientists write the things in the first column when the second column is shorter and easier to understand?

it is likely that likely
it is apparent that apparently
due to the fact that because
in the vicinity of near
in the state of New Mexico in New Mexico
was found to be was
It must first be established that First,

You can’t explain that!

For more examples, google “words and expressions to avoid” or “words and phrases to avoid”.

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2 Responses to “Writing more concisely”
  1. Jon Zeitler says:

    Writing with Style by John R. Trimble:
    addresses the same point (among others).

    Applying the examples Dave cited (and that spirit of clarity and conciseness), the average abstract can be reduced 10-25% with no loss in accuracy describing the research. That’s the abstract, supposed to be a condensed snippet, still too heavy.

  2. I’ll offer a few more from my reviewing and editing experiences:

    It can be shown that => (nothing…start the sentence here)
    It is evident that => Evidently
    It can be seen that => (nothing…start the sentence here)

    [These fall under the “let the reader decide” mantra. If it truly can be seen, it should be obvious enough to the reader that you don’t need to say so. If it can’t “be seen”, it needs to be explained or illustrated better anyway!]

    It is worth noting that => (nothing…start the sentence here)
    It is worth reminding that => Recall that

    [Of course “it is worth noting”; otherwise you wouldn’t be noting it, would you?]

    In short, I do not recall ever seeing an “It…that” phrase that truly was necessary! They are useless clutter. Avoid them.

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